Manage Appeals
Petition Type: New
ID: 7599
Submitted: April 24, 2021 at 9:24:02 PM
First Name: Bronwyn
Last Name: Bates
Student Number: 20019623
Email: 15bb31@queensu.ca
Degree Program: BSH
Plan: Psychology
Level of Study: 4
Petition Categories
Petition Categories: Request a review of instructors' decisions on grading of final examination and/or term work
Code: ARTH 248
Term: Winter
Year: 2021
Petition Category: Request a review of instructors' decisions on grading of final examination and/or term work
Instructor's Name: Norman Vorano
Component: Assignment
Petition Letter
Petition Letter: To whom it may concern,
I am appealing the grade of my Assignment 1 - Writing a Catalogue Essay for ARTH 248, an assignment worth 20 percent of my grade. I received a 75 percent on my assignment, however, the inline feedback I was given indicated that there were minimal mistakes with my assignment. The feedback said that I was missing 3 commas, had one repetitive sentence, could have rephrased a sentence and to avoid the use of slashes. These were the only criticism given. The written feedback I received was as follows; Thank you. An interesting example of an object arising from interacting cultures. A few places which could use a comma are indicated. I do not understand why 25 percent was taken off of my grade for minor grammatical errors. I am appealing this grade as I do not believe it is an accurate representation of my work.
Sincerely,
Bronwyn Bates
I am appealing the grade of my Assignment 1 - Writing a Catalogue Essay for ARTH 248, an assignment worth 20 percent of my grade. I received a 75 percent on my assignment, however, the inline feedback I was given indicated that there were minimal mistakes with my assignment. The feedback said that I was missing 3 commas, had one repetitive sentence, could have rephrased a sentence and to avoid the use of slashes. These were the only criticism given. The written feedback I received was as follows; Thank you. An interesting example of an object arising from interacting cultures. A few places which could use a comma are indicated. I do not understand why 25 percent was taken off of my grade for minor grammatical errors. I am appealing this grade as I do not believe it is an accurate representation of my work.
Sincerely,
Bronwyn Bates
Documentation
Professional Letter: Document1-0.pdf
Professional Letter Detail: I am providing my reviewed assignment - the inline feedback that I was given with my grade
Document: Written Feedback for Assignment 1.docx
Documentation Detail: Written Feedback