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Petition Type: New
ID: 4522
Submitted: May 3, 2018 at 6:30:26 PM
First Name: Nathan
Last Name: Sanghe
Student Number: 20010639
Email: n.sanghe@queensu.ca
Degree Program: BSH
Plan: LISC
Level of Study: 2
Petition Categories
Petition Categories: Request a review of instructors' decisions on grading of final examination and/or term work
Code: ENGL 100
Term: Fall/Winter
Year: 2017
Petition Category: Request a review of instructors' decisions on grading of final examination and/or term work
Instructor's Name: Dr Robert May
Component: Essay 3, Essay 4 and Final Exam
Petition Letter
Petition Letter: Hello,
I am writing this appeal letter on the basis that the final two essay's and final examination were marked unfairly compared to other students and/or the level of understanding we were instructed throughout the course. In regards to the final two essay's of the course, I took all the TA's evaluation suggestions and directly applied it to my final assignments but she still was very harsh and seemed to be overanalyzing every small little error in my essay's rather than the whole essay as a whole. She stated several times that she provided suggestions for delving deeper into the nuances of the text in order to develop dense close reading. The structure of the essay, in particular the thesis and the topic sentences, would benefit from further work. I worked very intently and focused on close reading and analysis and even got upper year tutors to aid me in these suggestions and even with all of their extra help, no fairness or even consideration of my attempts were given. Once I recieved Patricia's anaylsis and marking of my essay, I sent both essay 3 and 4 to an English professor at my old high school and she strongly believed that this marking is very unfair and poorely assessed my strong efforts in both essays. I am able to provide all of Patricia's (my TA) comments on my marking if need be and would really like for my essay's to be properly and fairly assessed as I feel my marks were not a fair assessment of my work.
Similarly, if my final exam was marked anything like my essay's throughout the course I would also like for that to be reevaluated based on my above remarks on this courses marking and how unfair it has been.
Thank you for your consideration,
Nathan Sanghe
I am writing this appeal letter on the basis that the final two essay's and final examination were marked unfairly compared to other students and/or the level of understanding we were instructed throughout the course. In regards to the final two essay's of the course, I took all the TA's evaluation suggestions and directly applied it to my final assignments but she still was very harsh and seemed to be overanalyzing every small little error in my essay's rather than the whole essay as a whole. She stated several times that she provided suggestions for delving deeper into the nuances of the text in order to develop dense close reading. The structure of the essay, in particular the thesis and the topic sentences, would benefit from further work. I worked very intently and focused on close reading and analysis and even got upper year tutors to aid me in these suggestions and even with all of their extra help, no fairness or even consideration of my attempts were given. Once I recieved Patricia's anaylsis and marking of my essay, I sent both essay 3 and 4 to an English professor at my old high school and she strongly believed that this marking is very unfair and poorely assessed my strong efforts in both essays. I am able to provide all of Patricia's (my TA) comments on my marking if need be and would really like for my essay's to be properly and fairly assessed as I feel my marks were not a fair assessment of my work.
Similarly, if my final exam was marked anything like my essay's throughout the course I would also like for that to be reevaluated based on my above remarks on this courses marking and how unfair it has been.
Thank you for your consideration,
Nathan Sanghe
Documentation
Professional Letter: Essay 2 feedback.docx
Professional Letter Detail: This is feedback from my second essay that I took direct notes from for my final two essays.
Document: Essay 3 feedback.docx
Documentation Detail: This is my 3rd essay feedback that was very poorly assesed.
Document: Essay 4 feedback.docx
Documentation Detail: This is my final essay feedback.
Amendment to Appeal 4522
Relevant Petition: 4522
New Information: I have been in contact with Dr. May over email but I did not meet with Dr. May in person regarding the marking of these assignments as it is all directed through the TA's. In email's sent to him concerning the assignments, he replied with,
If you think an error has been made, or if you wish your TA to expand on her comments, you should contact her via e-mail with your questions or concerns.
Your TA will then be able to expand on any of her comments you find unclear, or to address any errors that may have been made.
Thus, it seemed unfit to further meet with him as he directed me onwards to my own TA. I have also attached my clean copies for your own personal records.
Thank you,
Nathan Sanghe
If you think an error has been made, or if you wish your TA to expand on her comments, you should contact her via e-mail with your questions or concerns.
Your TA will then be able to expand on any of her comments you find unclear, or to address any errors that may have been made.
Thus, it seemed unfit to further meet with him as he directed me onwards to my own TA. I have also attached my clean copies for your own personal records.
Thank you,
Nathan Sanghe
Student Number: 20010639
Documentation
Professional Letter Detail: no doc
Document: SangheEssay3.docx
Documentation Detail: This is my third unedited essay as requested.
Document: SangheEssay4.docx
Documentation Detail: this is my fourth unedited essay as requested.
History
Originally submitted May 3, 2018 at 6:30:26 PM.
| Field | Reference | Old Value | New Value | Note | User | Date/Time |
|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|
| status | N/A | Received | Prepared for Review | Carrie Roosenmaalen | 2018-05-04 1:36:32 PM | |
| status | N/A | Prepared for Review | Incomplete | Spring Forsberg | 2018-05-07 3:09:04 PM | |
| status | N/A | Incomplete | In Review | Spring Forsberg | 2018-06-01 12:08:43 PM | |
| status | N/A | In Review | Withdrawn | Spring Forsberg | 2018-06-06 11:35:03 AM |

